Poetry

Something you guys don't know about me; I love writing. Poetry, books, lyrics... I have been wondering for a while if I should put up a poem that I have written here and now I have decided to do it. I would appriciate some feedback.
Here it is:

If I could choose to live forever, I would do it for me

I would travel around the world until there is nothing left to see

I would make all mistakes until I get it right

I would join all the battles until I win the fight

I would follow every dream that I didn’t succeed

I would go for what I want and not what I need

I would only care to make myself proud

I would do all the things that are not allowed

I would get a pair of wings and learn how to fly

I would tell the world, its one last good bye

I would make a machine to go back in time

To the life that I am living, the life that is mine

Because I won’t live forever, and I know that today

So from this breath until my last, I will live in every possible way